Poem -
alone in shadows.
blood stains thy palest skin,
Opencast hearts heart,
Depowering,
Each litre thus drain,
Is empowerments gain,
to thee,
Your sensual agony,
Your longing to be,
Bloods slow,
Colours change,
Thy bluestone complexion,
Red lips like bleeding rain,
Do follow frozen cold,
Reflection now untold,
Alone in shadows,
Forevermore,
No sunshine upon thy skin,
shine of diamonds ,
thy light now within,
Ruby lips forgotten ,
Bodies everlasting refusal ,
Avails rotten,
Thou content
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Comments
Dear Nardine,
Excellent verse, My applause, My five stars
Your above poem is being reserved for my appreciation in POET'S PEN
Love
WILLIAMSJI
Thank you kindly sir williamsji xx with loving thanks nardine Sanderson xoxo
Wow Nardine, nearly every line of this piece has vivid imagery........very powerful..........love is highly motivating and.....intoxicating.......great write.........tony
Thank you kindly sweetie, much love to you Tony, xx nardine xx
The opening lines are preponent -
"blood stains thy palest skin.
Opencast hearts heart,
Depowering,
Each litre thus drain,
Is empowerments gain,"
Ravindra Kumar
Thank your for your kind attention to this write sweet ravindra, xx much love nardine xx
Hey Lil Sis,
Ravindra, dear lady and Friend, placed it out there, better than any..Very Powerful and deep seeded words...You told your tale, in just these, anotated words alone, although the entire poem, was really "Big League".....A little Edgar Allen Poesh, to me.....Knocked this one out of the park....
Jimmy
"blood stains thy palest skin.
Opencast hearts heart,
Depowering,
Each litre thus drain,
Is empowerments gain,".................Job very well done..