Poem -

Altering

Altering


Altering.
Pathways
adjusted,
rerouted.
What
was
no more.
Time.
Constant
tinkering.
Circuits
plastic
being
reworded,
re-wired.
Experiences
add up.
Tweaking
perception.
Tools,
evolving
attitudes.
Time.
Takes
time.
Old vs
new.
Gulf of
perception.
Generational
divide.
Reality’s
creation.
Generational
divide.
Years
in the
making.
Smile
at their
all knowing
innocence.

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Jim "The Lad" ....

" generational divide" needs to be addressed on a regular time table for us out of tune! I have fun with my rand kids all the time trying to relate! fun stuff, and "cool write" JP!..............................................................................Jim
 

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Gwendoline

Once again you do not disappoint John. Your words are so well penned, rushing through the generation gaps, forcing the reader to take stock of the ever increasing changes as time vanishes old habits, to give birth to new ones. The image you have for this piece is superb and so very fitting with your message. Pinned for perfection 👌 x 

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E.J. Waling

You’re very kind Gwen. 

Thank you
JP
 

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Tony Taylor

"Gulf of perception..."   "Generational divide".......Bravo JP!!.....Love the way you have brought the picture to life with succinctly delivered.....Powerful phrases.....and wonderful food for thought for the minds eye to devour!!......PINNED!!.....well done dear poet brother!!........LOV E & ROCKETS!!.......T xo  :  )

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E.J. Waling

Thank you Tony I always appreciate your kind words
JP

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Being Me

Things change drastically from one generation to the next. I agree with Gwendoline, the picture is superb, the poem is thought provoking x

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Marion

Agree with all the above comments John, I always enjoy the work from your deep and enquiring mind ...hugs x

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