Poem -

ALWAYS SAYING NO

All her replies to questions were no 
Made things difficult as this poem will show 
I started by asking her to tidy her room 
Just a little spruce up with a vacuum 

The answer I'm sure you have guessed 
Made me anxious and feeling stressed 
No was her reply and played with her game
Her room remains untidy a terrible shame 

Then I asked if she wanted chips for tea 
Confident she would say yes and agree 
No again was the reply that she gave 
If only she said yes and would behave 

I was like her at that age I must confess
The trouble was with me I always said yes
Different generations and different times
Ending one of the most difficult rhymes

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The fish of the sea

Yes, I think we all go though so rebelling in our lives Kieran. But back in my day it was yes or the wooden spoon! Dont really think that's socially acceptable now... best wishes to you and as always Peace and smiles. 

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