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AMAZING GRACE

Might you remember when
That grass was but
A seed beneath the earth
 
An innocent in unlocked form
An unknown code and
​​Tightly bedded
Hidden well from any storm

And yet, twas storm released
And cracked the core
Empowered life to raise the
spore
And brought the sun to fusion
green
Call up the shoot to grow and
dream 

Divine the forces all at work,
to raise a fragile thing from
dirt with no more than a new
spring song, to egg it
On and On and On

A fine young blade
To take its place in fine
 green field...
Amazing Grace

But now to know and look
about and see it's number
flaunt and mass, an
undulating emerald rise,
emboldened pride to sky blue
sky

And who can say when
pointless came, to see it's
number all the same, in
replicas of all that's gone and
all to come from seeds not
born
The purpose just in purpose
not
The point of all...to end and
rot
To flourish in a sameness day
Till all the greenness fades
and fades... away

Amazing... Grace...

M P 19/4)21

  

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Jim "The Lad" ....

"Consider the lilies of the field" awesome write Marion!..................Jim

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Marion

Thankyou lovely man 🤗

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The fish of the sea

A fine young blade
To take its place in fine
 green field...
Amazing Grace

Solid structure that flows throughout plus a reflective tone... A cup of tea that couldn't go without a pin!!! Your work is fantastic Marion!! Has anyone told you that in a while? ;) love it.

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Marion

Thanks so much Max I always value your input love...appreciated X

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Gwendoline

The point of all...to end and
rot

wow Marion you captured the beauty of birth and life. And mused on the purpose leaving the reader in deep reflection as to what is the reason for all this beauty, to have it all end so suddenly. A wonderful poem. I agree with Fish you are a talented writer 

Hugs xx

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Marion

Thanks Gwen, I'm catching up on replies, sorry to bombard you but hate not answering hugs x

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