Poem - 01 February 2021, 01:14

An ancient mind

An ancient mind

Sore from sitting in the very same spot..Her old bones are weary, they have siezed into a knot

Aching with lying too long in a bed..She has twisted her kneck muscles and tormented her head

And anxiety engulfs this ancient mind..yearning an end to it’s suffering alas lliving is unkind

So she closes her eyes from this pain and frustration..and loses herself amidst her imagination

Where wandering thru corridors within a darkness so deep..Her panic is settled as she falls fast asleep...

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Greg Etsell01 February 2021, 01:24

hope your ok
wonderful poem

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Greg Etsell01 February 2021, 01:33

wonderful poem

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Jill Tait01 February 2021, 02:00

Awww Thank you Greg yes I am fine tho ❤️💙❤️

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