An onion of my life 🧅

My life is likened to an onion with so many layers of peelings
As I meander thru my head cunjuring from my inner feelings
Picking out within my memories snippets from my past
Reminiscing fun and laughter that’s given me a blast!!
An entire onion is an neverending ply of overlays
As my fingers scratch each flap of skin..they are like the memoirs of my lifelong days
Every single fold of lamina I find
leads me on to an other until I reach the very core
it feels just like my memoirs in my mind..tho I think of some, there will always be loads more
The center of the vegetable is my sweet, firm, juicy delights
That sums up for me the entire story of my lifetime plights
Decades of adventures and stories locked inside my vision
My taking for ages peeling an onion mission
Bit by bit of it driving me around the bend
On and on and on until I finally reach the very end...
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Wow Jill your use of the onion is just incredibly clever :) I loved the peeling of the layers, the hidden depths at the core. Your poem is a work of art my friend. What a visual and great pic choice xoxo 😘
Awww Thanks so much lovely lass ❤️🌹❤️
wonderful poem
as always wonderful poem
❤️🌹🌹❤️🌹🌹🥰
wonderful brilliant write Jill! I have heard a sociologist use that very analogy! and you call my writes brilliant? are you a sociologist?! wonderful concept my brilliant friend!......................................................................lad
Awww 🤣🤣its just my crazy mind lol Iam indeed lol an Onion 🧅🤣🌹❤️
What a lovely poem Jill! Really enjoyed the creativity in this one. If our lives are like onions are we all ogres? XD. Hope you are well Jill peace to you
Haha well we all drip drop tears so maybes we are just all Onions 🤣🧅🌹❤️Thank you my lovely ❤️🌹❤️