" DEATH AND BLOOD " (seducing the senses)
It is in the odorific attraction of blood
That death, begins to seduce her senses....
She waited as long as her pulse would allow
But the pungent corpse, helped crystallize her vow
And the stench was having an overwhelming effect
The veins on her neck began colorizing themselves
Like a revolution in thought, by Bertholt Brecht
Galileo came to her mind, as scientists said
The evidence of the senses is yours to accept
She tore open the floor boards, began tasting his last breath
And it tasted much sweeter as he teetered on death
She could take it no longer, she ripped open his chest
Began sucking on his heart, her tongue was her knife
It was in this moment when death did smell better life
She recalled the words of her father, the very first vampire
If she didn't follow her instincts, she'd be doomed to a life
As a blood thirsty liar...
Tony Taylor (Chicago)
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Comments
This is unbelievably good !!! Fine writing indeed !
Going to read it again now !!!! :)
Take care my friend.
YAY!! ~ thanx Richard!!........ it's such a huge compliment to hear you say you're going to read it again......VERY much appreciated brother!!.......... smiles............T xo
Great picture to go with a great write !
:) All the best.
Hey t I dig the vampire writes and this is a great one .does remind of dark shadows ,watched the TV show growing up very cool. She does not waste no time getting to his heart .lol I'm glad she listened to her father . I am digging this one all stars rock
Thanx so much ROCK!!......I had a feeling you'd enjoy this write........ especially after I read your write on the Lycanthrope............cool comment bro.......... appreciate this............ smiles...........T xo