Poem -
ANGELDOM
As a child
I aspired to
Angeldom
Well...
As adult I grew into
Not angel
At all
And t'was shocking
To know
How much devil
Resides
Within the most normal
Innocuous
Hide
These days I aspire
To be
Not at all
Or...
To live through each day
Quite
Invisibly small
These days
That young angel
Has long died inside
But a part of me hopes
That with God
She resides
M P 20/1/23
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NICELY WRITTEN POEM THE LAST SENTENCE THE BEST AMEN.
Thanks so much Linda x
WOW!! Miss MARION!!....although there is a great sadness expressed here there is a lovely scent of hope dangling in its leaves.......a divine tree of the power faith is planted deep within this beautifully expressed piece of nature's truth and angelic wisdom!!......ALL STARS & PINNED!!......love the formatting my friend!!.......Bravo!!.......ever the pleasure!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo
Tony I have so missed your generous and wise comments...an artwork.in themselves. Thanks so much lovely man x
Wow I think many of us can relate to this feeling. The loss of innocence, through the living between too many shadows in life. A powerful piece. Sad and yet with a glint of hope at the end found in the longing for it to not be completely lost x
Thanks love...I never doubted you would undersrand the meaning...hugs xx
"my words fly up, but my thoughts stay below. Words without though ne'er to Heaven go (the evil uncle in Hamlet) - but you think😇 and therefore act the little acts that esrn you your seat up above✌️ Keep thinking, black though the thoughts may be writing offers a way out ever, infinitely
Thanks John...your insight comforts x