Some great words in this poem. Unconsciously, invested, actuality. All chosen to convey the meaning behind your words. As to those well this poem reads to me like someone waking up in the morning and giving themselves a reality check. As that it is a great piece of writing. "Rub your eyes" is something mostly done in the morning or following crying so it could be following tears.
Like I always say, the shorter the better. Very truths in such few words. But it's the words that are used that create the meanings, the messages, the realities. Sometimes people need to wake up, period. I, myself have a lot of waking up to do. I really feel like I can connect with this poem, on a few rather different levels.
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Hello Giada...
This must be for the Majority?
Some people are alive when they feel like a Rocket who got a flame lit in the behind...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
Some great words in this poem. Unconsciously, invested, actuality. All chosen to convey the meaning behind your words. As to those well this poem reads to me like someone waking up in the morning and giving themselves a reality check. As that it is a great piece of writing. "Rub your eyes" is something mostly done in the morning or following crying so it could be following tears.
Like I always say, the shorter the better. Very truths in such few words. But it's the words that are used that create the meanings, the messages, the realities. Sometimes people need to wake up, period. I, myself have a lot of waking up to do. I really feel like I can connect with this poem, on a few rather different levels.
Well done! 💜
Thank you so much!!🫶🏻
You're absolutely welcome 🤗