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Jimmy Arnold

Greetings Jill,

True feelings can never be constructed, they can only be felt and birth deep from within side and through this poem, you have present just such.You speak from your heart, that which you gave from your heart, with all hopes and dreams of the same to be returned..Yours are words and true feelings, that can never be emulated by no other but you and you expressed them quite well...Keeping feeling what you feel, for no other can ever take away, that which you feel and belongs to no other but you, although they can be entrusted with, by you and you only....Heart spoken words are those words, that mean so much when they are held and means even more when they are given to another and they carelessly lose them.Allow yours never to be lost and trust, to who they are gave and expect and accept, nothing less in return...Very pretty poem of true feelings..

Kindest of regards,

Jim

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Kris Mar

Thank you, Jim.  I've never had such great feelings like this until I found the one whom I felt so strong and genuine.  Believe it or not, whether this person would love me nor like me in return I wouldn't mind however i won't let my life pass me by without letting this person know what I feel.  I feel so amazing.

Thanks again for your thoughts.

Cheers,

Jill

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Jill kristy Del mar

Good write, Congrats & thanks for sharing this poem "Annie"

I never thought I could ever possess the ultimate meaning of my existence. I know living a life without it is pointless and just by believing in it with anyone is just the way how it is and life just goes on until it's over.

My Vote, Nominated

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Kris Mar

Thank you Williamsji Maveli, my pleasure.  I really appreciate your vote and nominated me. 

Lovely greetings,

Jill 

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