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Any friend of Jesus is a friend of mine

Any friend of Jesus is a friend of mine

An eager child, I picked up stones
and washed them, clean and neat.
Then sold them for a penny
to the grannies on our street.

One of them had a poodle.
All legs and ball-shaped fur.
Its collar gleamed with diamonds.
They were REAL ones. I was sure!

The home birth of my baby bro.
I was shooed out the door.
Such immature injustice.
I was practically four!

And rubbing salt into my wounds,
behind that bedroom wall.
The goldfish bowl stayed in its place
so Blubby saw it all!

A friend would say "Come to our house."
I was little and shy.
This family had status
and now I'll tell you why.

We'd traipse into the front room.
The one they kept for best.
A framed portrait hung on the wall.
It left me most impressed.

The picture was of Jesus.
The meaning sank in, quick.
They must have REALLY met him.
He'd given them his pic!

On the back seat of our Mum's car
with baby propped beside.
She put the daimler into gear
and started up our ride.

At the first bend, before my eyes,
the car door opened wide.
And with a silent, sideways lean
my sister rolled outside.

The open door. My mouth was shut.
The baby blanket bare.
The car still moved. I sensed a change
and watched my Mother's hair.

A tiny moment in my life.
Not scared. Not judged. Just here.
Then frightened scream and squealing brakes.
A Farley's rusk of fear.

Fast forward and the fish long flushed.
Child car seats now firm faves.
And all those grannies that I knew
have stones upon their graves.

Those childlike thoughts, so unconstrained.
This conclusion I pen.
Although I'm more 'in the know' now,
was more in the now, then!

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linda wright

you have penned a lot of different things for the reader to take in well thought out and thought provokingΒ 

good poetry if you getr a chance read a couple of mine too linda keep writing your good at getting the point acrossΒ 

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Amanda Wilson

Thanks very much Linda. I appreciate your feedback. Will check out your work!Β 

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Tony Taylor

Wow!!...AMANDA WILSON!!...... this is a VERY well crafted narrative write!!..... with a strong sense of rhythm and timing here....... all of the details coming together in a truly compelling piece of story telling........ you've obviously written before....... this is well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered.....ALL STARS....... and .......WELCOME to COSMO!!...... looking forward to more!!.......T xo.Β  ?

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Amanda Wilson

Thanks Tony.Β Β I'm blushing here! I have written poetry since I can remember, though mostlyΒ as a personalised gift for the 3 Fs. Friends, family and facebook!!. IΒ joined CosmoFunnel in the hope of stretching my lyrical muscles amongst like-minded individuals, and to get some feedback on my work. Your comment after a few hours of my first publication is making me think I did the right thing. Many thanks for your fab words of encouragement. More poems to come!Β 

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Amanda Wilson

Thank you very much!! It's great to be here!Β 

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Paula Lee Perry

Welcome to Cosmo! I enjoyed this poem so very much. You have a wonderful talent for causing the reader to be right there with you for the length of the poem! Great job! Sounds like a fun childhood to me!Β Β Β  Have a blessed week! Paula

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Amanda Wilson

It's great to hear that you enjoyed my reminiscing! Funny how much can actually be remembered from so long ago, once you put your mind to it. These stories took place in North Yorkshire, England at the beginning of the 70s, to give you a bit of background information. I was the only kid for a while then along came my sister two years later, then a brother one year after that. Maybe I should write about my baby brother who joined the gang eleven years later. That's another chapter in life!

Incidentally, my sister fell out of the car after my mum had dropped a friend off at her house,Β and for some reason the door wasn't closed properly (just to make it perfectly clear that I wasn't secretly trying to dispose of my siblings!) She has a scar on her lip to show for the experience!Β 

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