Poem -
ARE you surprised ?
I guess Iβm turning coldΒ
And becoming cruelΒ
Like youΒ
Are you surprised?
Iβm acting like you
you pushed me
To become heartlessΒ
Like youΒ
I seem not to careΒ
AnymoreΒ
Iβm surprised myselfΒ
Iβm sorryΒ
Iβm like you Β
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Comments
Hello Esmeralda...
It's good to have a choice...
If you can't beat 'em join 'em?
Let your smile change the world don't let the world change your smile?
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
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thank you !!!Β
Powerfully insightful piece ESMERELDA!!.......allowing another's personal opinions and attitudes to rub off on you can be seriously destructive!!.......ALL STARS!!.....well done dear poet sister!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?β΄β€
awe thank youΒ
thank you tony !!!Β
Reminds me of a song called " dead inside" by muse.
Great write Esmeralda.Β
aww gotta look into that song thank youΒ
Very profound. Been there great write
thank you GregΒ
very well penned
thank you ??Β