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Aries Azurea Star

Aries Azurea Star

With a mouse named Unicorn
It really says it all
Knew the second she was born
In love with her I'd fall

She simply is perfection
Have had not one complaint
My number one selection 
Smile almost makes me faint

Never recorded in history
Receiving such a gift 
Why we're so lucky's mystery 
Her voice makes spirits lift

Her beauty's way beyond compare 
It's just impossible to do
Her gorgeous flowing angel hair 
And butterfly lashes too

What differs her from rest of crowd
Her kind and gentle heart
She does the right thing, I'm so proud
And have been from the start

Entire world does benefit 
Each time she inhales 
A better place with her in it
To make sure good prevails

Sometimes can be a real class act
Get you laughing unexpected 
She's quite slick and that's a fact 
Her quickness much respected

But up and all above the rest 
Her life's what gave mine texture
Constantly puts me to the test 
The one dishing out a lecture

Too much to brag on her behalf
I could go on forever
Just hope she follows a positive path
And that we always stick together

      - Ashley McRitchie

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Tony Taylor

Hi ASHLEY,
You have delivered a gorgeous piece of poetic verse here....I like the A,B,A,B, rhyme scheme you chose to convey the love you have for your daughter.....she sounds wonderful and you have painted a truly lovely portrait of her here......ALL STARS!!.....thanx so much for sharing this with us all!!.....and.....in case no one has said so.....WELCOME to COSMO!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo  : )

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The fish of the sea

I relate to the highest degree, although it frustrates me that she can never see it.... best wishes TFOTS 

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