Poem -
Arrow Up And Down
You're my Heaven and my Hell
Soft as the wind, yet so far away
Nobreak between us, you might run off
You may say keep, no promises
Hold me, take me away, let go and fall
Take my heart treat it apart
As you can see my heart won't follow
My tears as rain, my feeling are like lightning
The thunder is my voice as you run off
IÂ see your eyes turn red as the dark sun rises upon you
I say return and you say never
IÂ come back and you turn your face back away
I found happiness with another and you've gone away
I smile and choose a sweet colorful flower
I'm happy and ypu're lost
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Greetings Midnight Candy,
Contentment finally found in the arms of another, after constantly being pushed aside, placed on hold,and shone of her true value.The ups and downs of a love, build from lust by one, (he) and (she) with all of her committed  soul and  soon to be whethered heart, although held together without cemented promises.....In this case enough was enough.........Like the way you set this up........Very nice, (the hero prevails)........One persons rubbish fed thoughts, is anothers treasure....... Â
Take Care,
Jim
Thanks Shah,
Like always, you heart felt comments means a bunch to me and a multitude of,(back at yous'),in store and how are you, at your best i hope???
Take care,To you both,
JimÂ
Shah, that's one of the things i am trying to do is read into the mind of the poet and see how close i can come to their thoughts and feelings as they compose their poem.It offend some,sorry no harm intended and it allows me the opportunity, to see the poem as the poet and in any other aspects if they existed and if the poet critics me, "great," that's what i look for but again thanks for the comment....You wear your heart in your hands and you constant reach out to people with heart in hand.....without expecting anything in return except the contentment of the recipient.......
Kindest of regards,
JimÂ