Ascend

Wizened hoary husk
Open.....
Thy muscled shell
Open, close
Doors;
Let I espy
With eyes unchanged,
They've seen worst off
Of all senses
Afraid
Their the last to go~seeing.
Rapid hearts
Normally fly,
Through Crimson kings
Riverbed,
Thermal coated thoughts
Of flesh structured by bone
Bleed true blue to face
Not even fire breathing furnaces
Enough maintenance, when
Blood runs cold.
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Gazing into soul
Know, stolen life from within
The rustling bare branches of our trees
Pray words had reached you
And you listened,
Making me immortal.
Liberate
The dying eye
Ascend beyond realities realm
Where red ropes
Never hold up
Gold carpeted runways,
Names gain weight
Falling off the listed page;
Moon parties
In twilight clouded dance floors,
Feelings shouldn't be out
In the way
For hoofers to trample
But embodiment's heart
Forgetful of what a right place
Remembers ripe age
And burning in love;
Try, try again
Recycled intelligence anew,
Begin breathing
Worlds of difference.
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Super awesome write....middle verses are great great great
I super appreciate that Mark. The inspiration comes from a movie called Big Fish, if you never seen it make it a must. It is a truly well rounded and beautiful movie.
Hey D!! ~ Loved "Big Fish".........I can see how that would have inspired this most excellent piece........" Recycled intelligence anew..."........ and I agree with the other comments......... you really out did yourself with some of the phrasing and word choices in this write........... your skills are evolving so quickly ~ it's a pleasure to behold!!........... high fives bro!!............ ttyl...........T xo
Thank you T, if or when my soul ascends I believe my embodiment to enjoy the pleasures of recycled life then that of the party in the sky, which how cool of a choice is that. Some mere speculation, and Big Fish has inspired another write I would have to dig up from when I was a teenager and saw this movie in the theater when it came out. I am glad to hear this type of encouragement,I really appreciate that. Oh and T, im not going anywhere brother. Peace.
My type of poetry. Dark and mystic at the same time, interesting lines full of ancient twists. You know well how to play with your words and I surely can say that I loved this one entirely. Thank you for sharing such a marvelous piece with us.
All the best Goldie
Thank you Goldie, when the spiritual grasps you it can be a very powerful write. I appreciate you taking the time to check out my poems. Im going to read some more of your work.