Poem -
Ash Hands
I touched a heart
And watched it
Crumble at my fingers
I tried to sing to the birds
They heard the world's
Darkest melody
I tried to love
When hate still
Lingered
And I was put to death
For my love was a felony
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WOW!!.........this is good on so many levels.........it's amazingly symbolic........as though you were testing arguments for validity ~ the ability to draw appropriate conclusions from given evidence.........the grim reaper's ashen hands creeping in through song.........and through love............this is a stunning write Onlooker!!............Ā Ā "For my love was a felony!"..........fantastic phrasing.......Ā Ā Ā 10*sĀ Ā FAVĀ Ā Ā Ā .........smokin' grooves my friend!!............T xo
Hey, Big brother as always you have my appreciation for stopping by...Tony..I have to say that you do a magnificent job when it comes to taking in the piece, enjoying it and then analyzing it, thanks tons friend
Curious
Curious 5* my friend...
WOW!
sparrowsong
Thanks bunches Sparrowsong much love
Curious