Poem -
Assessing the Blues
Assessing the Blues
I see you and
You are not blue
Most definitely not
Mediterranean
Chows tongue
Or Maltese sky blue
I see you
In fact I can see
Right through you
I hear you
You don’t sound blue
Most definitely not
True
Berry
Powder
Paint-box
Or duck egg blue
On the contrary
I can see
And I can hear you too
For what it's worth
I would not consider
Yourself blue
If I was you
I would consider
Myself
Well and truly read ..
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Comments
What I get here is...'seeing right through the act' Neville. There are people who for whatever reason we have to support ...whether because of professional etiquette or politeness, it matters not. We all know its a game and very often this kind of person actually gets off on the game play. Or in other words gas no shame or dignity. Well this is what I get anyway and I am again.impressed by your ability to pack so much into a few interesting and well chosen lines and words x
she reads him like a book so she does ............................ thanks M .. N :) x
Hello Neville, this is a clever write on the mask a person can wear in order to reap from the sympathy of others. But really they can only display a shallow pool to those who truly understand the depths of real pain. So their mask is visible to an all knowing set of eyes. That is what I got from this fab write
Gwen x
Then you got me ...
So what we gonna do now eh' ..
Answers on a postcard only ..
But until then ..
Thank you so very much dear Gwen ...
All Good Things to You n Your Pen :)
Neville x
Sorry I missed this what a wonderful poem
sorry I missed this poem
No worries Greg, I am however absolutely delighted that you got here in the end .. Always appreciated my friend ... Neville
I like the tone of this of Neville. What a thought provoking write.
Cheers Max, thank hue kindly
Neville