Poem -

Awake

Woman in the mirror combs her hair
   Has not much to say.

   Doesn't remember.

The house is dark, middle of the night.

Memories are blank, drank something 

   Not supposed to be in her teacup?

   The moon shines through

Window in the bathroom.

The man in the bedroom is unaware.

   She's thinking like she's supposed to.
 

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Fairy Tales

They are both very good. This one is the best to me. A Nice Write. J.

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Rory McGinlay

Thanks for reading, Jac
As for yours, there are perhaps 
Old things i would like to restore
To original glory.
My body for example 🤣

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Bernadete van d...

The last four lines say a lot. 
P.S.  You are very inspired lately,
some very good write, Rory. 

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S.zaynab.kamoonpury

Great imagery narrative poem, does she have amnesia?
Kudos.!

plz also read and comment my newest poem

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