Poem -
BALLET SUPERNOVA
This earth has not a thing
As warming
As the beauty
In nature's sunlit shoring
Where the waves of eons
Seed
The beauty
That we all take for granted
As an everyday
Birthright
------------------------------------
When in actuality
The Ballet Supernova
Has been on Broadway
For so long now
That we
The chosen of this day
Simply
No longer notice
The brightly shining
And life-giving
Light
Of our own
Possibilities...
Tony Taylor
Chicago
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Loved the Title Tony and the poem it self of course :)Â
Thanx SPACE POET!!.... glad you enjoyed it my friend!!..... smiles.....T xo ?âłâŽâ„â?â„â„
I enjoyed this one Tony, I couldn't help but think that you may have been inspired by Spacepoets recent poems. I totally agree with your veiw point though.
I especially like these linesÂ
Take care - SydÂ
No!! Actually, I write a blog on "Metaphysics" and although Space Poets stuff is cool.... it's something I've been studying and writing about for 15 + years....thanx brother!!..... glad you enjoyed it!!.... Glide On Love!!.....T xo â„
Wow! 15 years plus! I don't think I've ever stayed focused on something for so long... Apart from music maybe. I'll have to give your blog a read sometime. I enjoy documentaries on such things. I hope I can understand without the visual aids.
Take care - SydÂ
My Dear Brother Poet Tony,
The Stars of a play, "The Brilliant Ballet", are lauded by just a few
The greatest show in the Universe, has not gotten "rave reviews"
But the one called "Greed And Ignorance", has been the top rated for many years
As the masses cheer, the wise men weep, for they know the end is near
Peace, Love and Plies,
Larry xxx
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You're so awesome LARRY!!.....I'm so sorry I didn't catch this weeks ago!!...this most insightful and beautifully poetic response is "Off the chain" brother poet!!....LOVE IT!!...LOVE YOU!!....thanx for this!!.......ttyl....T xo
Really like the imagery you have nailed here Tony! There is a great energy to this piece that you get to feel the more you read it- nice work brother!!
Thanx STEVIE!!.....massive apologies for the lateness of my reply!!......very much appreciated my friend!!......Kings to you!!......later......T xo
I like this a lot, and itâs so very true.??
Hi Tony,
i read your works and think, now this is a real poet. ??
Wow JG!!....what a 'way cool' duet of comments you've left me here (above & below)......especially coming from one the coolest cats in search of the truth in this miraculous universe we find ourselves in!!.....much appreciated my friend......I love that you went out of your way and went back to find this!!....smiles......stay groovy bro!!.......peace-n-stuff!!......T xo â„??