Poem -
Be warned!
I stepped away
My braine frozen still
I couldn’t move or say
A thing.
My body got rigid,
Turned to stone
I was overflown
By freezing liquid.
But then, a miracle happened
What had first frightened
Me
Thawed me
With the gift of warmth.                Â
A glorious feeling settled in
But then accros my mind came a warning:
Don’t you not let yourself surprise
When there’s water cold as ice
If you accidentely put the shower on cold.
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Comments
Although it can be a terrible thing i did have a smile when reading this as it has happened to me!! luckily it was the cold and not the hot! Life is sometimes like that shower..we expect one thing but unexpectedly get something else..but things turn our right in the end.....Very nicely put together , good story telling and nice descriptive language used! Well done! and welcome to the Cosmo family..enjoy your journey!
Lodigiana xx
Thank you very much!
Indeed it's better to be frozen for a second than have burns for a couple of days :)Â
Marsipona
In capturing the moment.....you have found a VERY clear poetic voicing!!.....I enjoyed the effort put into the details here!!.......ALL STARS!!......well done dear poet sister!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo ✴??✴
Thank you so much!
I really appreciate this!
Marsipona
i know the feeling but it always surprises me...well writtenÂ
Thank you!
The water is always cold in the beginning :)Â
Marsipona