~ BEAUTIFUL HUMAN ~
{manifesting the poetic}
Wrapped and coiled, coyly within
The innate intrigue of self-expression
Poets do find a sense of unexplored territory
Much like treasures of the ocean floor
Laying there, bare, open to interpretation
With nothing to hide
Except for all that is obvious
When we, as writers
Artists,
Can tap momentarily into the awe
Of that most overwhelmingly inspiring
Spiritual energy,
That infinitesimal pipeline into human potential
Where the "God Particle" swims
Where DNA is malleable, vulnerable
That window into the past, the future
Where anything conceivable
Is made possible
Simply
By employing brushstrokes
Of creativity
And remaining openly aware
That altered states of consciousness
Exist beyond compare
Within the beauty
That is nature,
And made manifest
By,
The Beautiful Human....
Tony Taylor
* a work in progress
Support CosmoFunnel.com
You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.
Comments
Wow very well err.. Beautiful..Where an earth do you think your ideas from xxAmazingxx
Wow!!... Thank you JILL!!......a truly moving comment/review......I think my ideas come from LOTS & LOTS of self-reflection....thanx again dear poet sister.... you are too kind!!...... Be blessed my friend!!...... smiles....T xo : )
???
Beautifully put my friend.
J
YAY!!...Thanx for the PIN JOHN!!..... can't really ask for more than that!!.... smiles....... your cyber-friend and admirer......T xo. : )
"Nothing to hide but all that is obvious" WOW what a line!!! ? Fantazmo write up Tony. Nailed it!
Shalom
YESSSS!!...I'm so psyched that you caught that particular line AL!!..... means a lot to me...... awesome...... and thanx so much for the PIN brother!!..... Big Smiles!!.....T xo. : )
Hi Tony
another wonderful piece that captures the essence of humanity! Art , poetry, love, pain, freinds, and family! Our yearning ,and need to express our feelings inspire us to tell our stories good or bad so that we may share a little bit of our souls with others!
Love you Brother xoxoxo
Moose
YAY!!....thanx so much MOOSE!! (Mike)...... It's so cool to see you on the pages brother..... I hope to see a LOT more of you..... I'm ALWAYS more than curious to hear your impressions of my work...... Capturing the essence of humanity...... couldn't ask for much more of an insight than that my friend......LOTS of LOVE to you and yours!!....... Be blessed my friend..... to the extent that I can pray for your success in this life..... stay awesome bro!!...... Peace n Stuff....T xo. : )
Simply beautiful and uplifting.
Poets are like stained glass, some times we use our emotions to spin a tale of fiction. While the colors of our life can bleed through the surface making us aware of our weakness and our strengths as creative writers and artist. You are a word-smith and that is why I am a huge fan.
Thanks for sharing a fantastic poem.
Favorite Line:
Infinitesial: I had to look it up. So cool!
Wikipedia, infinitesimal
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Infinitesimal
Accessed January 2, 2020
Wow KATINA!!.... apologies for not seeing and responding to this sooner.... an awesomely thorough comment indeed!!.... Yep!!...I LOVE that word infinitesimal..... It's one of those that pops in my writing regularly... or at least where I find appropriate places for it..... precisely because it has this effect on writers and lovers of poetry....... it comes so 'trippingly off of the tongue'!! (smiles)....Thanx SO very much for the comment and your lovely impressions!!...... stay groovy girlfriend........T xo. : )
You're welcome Tony. Glad you liked it.
I'm still working on my review skills, there is a lot to writing reviews. Since I became a member here, I am inspired to learning as much as I can about analyzing literature, to make sense of metaphors and other areas. Have a great day.
My Dear Tony,
You have brilliantly portrayed the amalgamation of the Human Soul.
Steered by the innermost feelings of love.
Life's journeys take us in many directions.
But, hopefully, it's final destination is eternal happiness.
All my love,
Larry xxx
Amen to that LARRY!!..... Ah the sweetness of happiness!!.....I am SO with you brother!!...... Peace n Stuff!!......thanx for this!!......Hugs-n-Smiles!!......T xo. : )