Beautiful Nightmare
"Don't be upset with the beautiful disaster. It's your masterpiece. You've created a Monster. One of the most gentle, generous, humble, ruthless, savage, demonic beings ever known to man. A man capable of the utmost remorse, with demons that brew beneath his skin. He feels his tendons strain from the pressure.They rip and tear at muscle and tissue until the pain becomes unbearable. A mix, of psychotic laughter and screams of the damned exit the body which is his vessel. Forming the shape of a rabid beast, with the whisper of a thousand last breaths, His soul is overcome. Emotionless. The darkest pits of hell guard their gates from Him. He is the definition of Evil. He has learned to control it. He quirks with a smile, "I'm fine." With a light chuckle, he continues on his way. He is unpredictable. He is strong. He is dangerous. He is out of place. He is a Masterpiece. He is your Masterpiece. I am your Beautiful Nightmare." ©
Written By: Steven Coverdale
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SC....your savage and macabre imagery is frightening. You write with a controlled and deliberate entrance into evil that just gets worst in the next sentence. The reader is fascinated by this Masterpiece of their own nightmare. Great write!
val
Thanks! I greatly appreciate the positive feedback!
Wow..im kinda speechless honestly. Thank you so much Val for the positive feedback..i just got myself worked up and vented out in words instead of letting it brew and fester inside me like i tend to do..and it seems to be a great outlet. Looking at your profile, seeing some of the amazing poems you have written, I'm humbled..to hear someone say they appreciate the feelings i put into words marks me in a different way..thank you. I will be forever grateful for your kind words. God Bless.
Dude!!.. This is freakin' awesome!!.....a masterful delivery of content.... in an almost definition type dictionary format in the delivery!!..... reads exactly like the 'Beautiful Nightmare' it is intended to be!!......smokin' grooves dear poet brother!!......PINNED this one!!...... well done!!...... LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?☀✴✳
again..i feel almost stunned. I threw this together in about a 5 minute blind rage. i am so grateful for the kind words and positive feedback. I finally feel like this rage has a purpose. Thank you so much.
This is absolutely phenomenal Steven. I am blown away. The way you formatted it everything is just perfect. It reads so effortlessly and the bold and italicize words make it read like that. If you hadn't have done that I don't think it would've read the same so that goes to show formatting is important and you hit the nail squarely on the head with this one. This write just as Val said is a Masterpiece and a brilliant one. And venting with words and writing for me is one of the greatest releases because I leave the emotions in the words and it always seem like my shoulders and heart feel lighter afterwards. I am pinning this and all stars to you and welcome to Cosmo I am so glad you decided to post this and am eagerly awaiting more writes from you!! :))
xxxxLily
i cant thank you all enough..this is incredible. I'm speechless...