Poem -
Beautiful Pond
Beautiful Pond
Dr. Aney Paul
I was waiting for my ride
I saw a small pond nearby
I sat next to the pond
A beautiful fountain in the middle
Spraying water a few feet up
I saw one shiny little fish
Then many came
Swimming around
In the blue water
Blowing bubbles
coming closer to me
Multicolored scales
Shining like diamonds
Big and small
Beautiful to see
I was wondering
What they are looking for
Food or freedom?
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really nice write! welcome to Cosmo!........................Jim
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Thank you,
Aney Paul
Thanks Jim,The Lad.
Wow...reads like a mystical dream of life and new beginnings...really nice x
Thank you Marion.
What an awesome write! How you casually brought the reader into your vision was extremely clever, I honestly wasn't expecting the message at the end. An amazing concept here!!! Welcome to the Cosmos!
Beautiful writing, I loved how visual this was. Like a daydream. Ending with a powerful message indeed
Welcome to Cosmo :)