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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

An extremely good, affectionately and motherly verse. My applause to the the author.

Regards

Williamsji Maveli

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BLOSSOM

Cute Susan, wrapped up very sweetly!!  Nice write!  Congrats on your nomination :)

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Susan O'Reilly

thanks hun glad you liked this little one cheers x

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Surabhi Saxena

Hey Susan..!

A short and a lovely one..:)
Really liked it...
Keep Writing..!

Regards
Surabhi

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Susan O'Reilly

thanks Surabhi glad you liked computer in library playing up won't let me accept your friend request keeps shutting down I'll accept it later when I'm home cheers x

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