Poem -
bedends
I need to live. She says.
I tell her I do too. We're talking by
our bedends
As the doctor strolls up through
We need to live. We say.
Well, I'm so glad, that's so good,
say's doctor with an olde world
smile
It's better that you should.
We look around in unison and
ponder this grand plan, I notice
as the sun shines through the
window to her hand
I need to live she says. I tell her I
do too. We smile just for a
moment then she sobs
but I can't do...
that
M ~
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Comments
Having just read this, my eyes need a hug x
Sending your eyes a huge hug. Seriously, I knew that you, of all people,
would completely understand this...hugs X
Hi Marion,
Poignant, especially as I
lost my wife recently.
Love,
Terry.
xoxo :)
Bless you Terry...many hugs to you x
Such a heartfelt write thank you for sharing reminds me of some personal times
Thanks again bigs hugs
Jayjay
Hi Jay Jay...thankyou love. None of us are sane love, some are just better actors...hugs x
I wasn't expecting your last line, superb, how you manage to make a conversation come alive with imagery not to mention the emotion dear Marion. Just fabulous. 🌹
Oh..thankyou!! For that lovely comment Shirley...sincerely x
hugs Marion, it's hardest for those that are left behind..............................Jim
Of course it is Jim and sadly something every one has faced or will face. Its lovely to see you on here, where do you dissappear too? When you going to write for us again. We miss you. 💕
Marion matters within one's heart from any loss come from having experienced them.
Elegantly put into words and tactfully done and Jim's comment speaks volumes.
Hugs xx
Aw thankyou Shaun, its great to see you back on here again by the way...looking forward to your next write...soon...I.hope...hugs x
Marion enough of me. For it is great to see YOU back on here!!
And dare say, I speak for many regarding that issue.
For you write from both ends of poetries spectrum and always good to read and see where you take a reader with your thoughts and observations.👍🏼
Hugs for you my dear friend and better :)
Shaun xx
Ah you bloody charmer you...and I love it lol...just come back from wherever it is that you and Jim dissappear to...you are missed 💕
MR bloody charmer to you honniebunnie!!!
And me and Jim's whereabouts are of no concern of yours Marion :)
But hey, we're clearly back on here now.
Will be catching up tomorrow good Marion and hugs to you.
For this charming man, is going to his charming bed, put his charming head on his charming pillows and try to have a charming fucking sleep.😊
Shaun xx
🤣🤣🤣😆😆...night Mr charmer x