~ BEINGS OF LIGHT ~
I do not know much about Gods
But to feel the immensity of their insight
Catapult me into another intensity
Brings comprehension of a deep communion
With supposed Gods, composed of light...
The light, from nature's good
The light, from mother earth
The light from the deepest recesses of space
And the misunderstood reaches of time
Call these gods, what you may
Of that, from that, which did create
The facade of man, that temple wherein
All wisdom and faith does abide
And, where seemingly mislaid...
Complete mastery, does still hide
For to broach that which is circumscribed
Speaks directly, to metaphysical man
Abolishing all time and space
And help men become
Those gods themselves
Those beings of light
That did first create
The idea of a God
In the very first place
A glorious experiment
Called, the human race...
Tony Taylor
* another work in progress
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Brilliantly penned my poetic friend ❤️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️💙
Why thank You kindly Miss JILL!!....smiles.......T xo : )
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wow wow wow
what wnderful poem
i love it
Thank You GREG!!...you are too kind!!......but don't stop!!......big smiles!!....T xo : )
I particularly like the last lines Tony because I believe that is exactly what we are...a genetic experiment...glorious being optional...for me anyway. I agree with the entire verse but as you know am not speaking to the gods at present.🤪🤪 Brilliant write though, written with intensity and feeling. It's very uplifting actually, really enjoyed...⭐⭐⭐
YAY!!.....Thank You Miss MARION!!....yes indeed....there are many who would agree with you/us on that idea.....that we are/were an experiment for a far more evolved species of beings......try Zechariah Sitchen and his books and theories on the Anunnaki......truly some of the most brilliant conceptual/historical stuff I've EVER read......and it agrees MORE than wholeheartedly on this idea of manipulated DNA etc......I DO SO look forward to your comments, impressions, and insights on my stuff dear poet sister!!......talk soon......your cyber-friend and admirer!!........Tony!!.................T xo : )
Tony and you say 'another work in progress'.
Well sir, damn the torpedoes your beautifully written poem to me, seems
perfectly dovetailed and no room for improvement one iota.
A real joy and tour de force to behold and become quickly bewitched by your writing and your technique.
And a poem that asks that age old question of who are we and what does anyone of us perceive to be or of our standing in the universe.
Loved it!
And a great poetry cliff-hanger of an ending to boot!⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
I wish you well good Tony and masterfully delivered.