Beneath the starry skies.
The universe felt my heart, beneath the starry skies
It knew it was you, and your bright blue eyes
That claimed my love
And held my soul
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For shooting stars in the sheets of black
Had my mind like flashes
Going back
To the night of a kindred fire, where we met in loves desire
How wonderous are the stars when you watch them burning high
And the romantic views of a pleasent moon
Captivate the sky'
That shadows the love
By cradled light
Softly we embraced
Between the light and dark, and love had its own stage
We were never ment to be apart of sorrow
Nor was the ending supposed to be a tragic turn
I feel you in my all , in everything and burn like I'd blinked and you were here, always near
Still holding my hand, still embraced between time
For nothing leaves me more breathless than your love , your blue eyes
Beneath The starry skies
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You must be prepared for the dark side.
Always light ?❤️
Beautiful, breath taking views, soft and unique! You really captured something inspiring. From the long lines that all rhymed, to the way you described the scene throughout the entire poem. I'm impressed!
Favorite Stanza:
For shooting stars in the sheets of black
Had my mind like flashes
Going back
This is so powerful, the images streak in front of your eyes upon reading it.
Happy Holidays from Newark, Ohio
Thank you ?
Thank you Katina❤️?
merry Christmas sweetheart
What a lovely review xo
Deano!
Love the title, and though the body of the poem is quite sparse...or non-existent, it was beautiful. (a lot better than mine! Maybe I should leave out the body of my poems!). Thanks for the idea!
Matthew.
Haha ?❤️