bitter cat
breaking bread with loneliness
on grubby grass
in melting skies
four paws down
and eyes to go
to run away
or lest you know of
love again
and
bitterness,
Hi Marion, hope you are very well. A great write that expresses the sadness and bitterness of lost love and the uncomfortable sensation of loneliness that follows. Thank you for sharing. XX
I wouldnĀ“t say that Marion, your poem packs more of a melancholy punch, the first line contrasts the association with contented cat with bitter cat, which is a superb lead in and sets the tone of what is to follow. Ā“Ā“Breaking bread with loneliness on grubby grassĀ“Ā“ brilliant! First class, cutting edge writing indeed.Ā XX
Wow everything I have read so far is on lost love. This is a great short and metaphor for such a bitter isolating feeling felt. Always such fabulous ink from you my friend ā¤Ā
This is a very special feline dedication Marion and then some my friend ..
SomethingĀ both so simple and so complex is by no means, no mean featĀ
Yours truly, a fan ..Ā
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Hi Marion, hope you are very well. A great write that expresses the sadness and bitterness of lost love and the uncomfortable sensation of loneliness that follows. Thank you for sharing. XX
Bless you Tony...I.prefer yours lol...just read it and its far more poetically beautiful...thank YOU for sharing š
I wouldnĀ“t say that Marion, your poem packs more of a melancholy punch, the first line contrasts the association with contented cat with bitter cat, which is a superb lead in and sets the tone of what is to follow. Ā“Ā“Breaking bread with loneliness on grubby grassĀ“Ā“ brilliant! First class, cutting edge writing indeed.Ā XX
Wow everything I have read so far is on lost love. This is a great short and metaphor for such a bitter isolating feeling felt. Always such fabulous ink from you my friend ā¤Ā
Thanks so much Gwen xx
I love this short piece on lost love...in your Marion take style and love the metaphors within. Brilliant writing. Px
Thankyou P...always appreciated xx
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Thankyou.Leah xx
Thankyou Leah xx
WOW.
One quality piece after another.
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Not true but you can keep saying it lol..
thankyou John x
This is a very special feline dedication Marion and then some my friend ..
SomethingĀ both so simple and so complex is by no means, no mean featĀ
Yours truly, a fan ..Ā
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Thankyou and ditto...I am also a fan...of yours X
How cool is that :) xx