Poem -
~ BLACK CAT ~
A black cat came to me,
It spun,
On the marble intentions
Of its lineage.
Its secret rebel lightening
An omen.
In the parallel nature of wind
It glinted.
Its blackness, re-baptized fluidity.
Mother Nature's prowler.
It pounced upon my ego,
Marked me, scarred me,
Excluded me,
No kiss, no hiss.
It mangled my depression,
It licked my wounds,
Its sandpaper tongue
Left dark, and blank,
My previous impressions.
My mind is a criminal,
Cruel, quixotic,
A danger,
To itself.
A Black Cat came to me,
It spun
On the marble intentions,
Of its insanity.
It hisses....now.... deep inside.
A twist,
In the DNA,
Of my,
Alien,
Lineage....
Tony Taylor
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great poem Tony as always. I hope you will go read my new poem the WILTED LIFE agin great poem
Hey GREG E!!....thanx so much for this my friend..... and YES indeed.....I did go read your poem called "Wilted Life"....I enjoyed it very much and I left you my impressions bro!!.....thanx again!!..... Peace.......T xo ?✴❤
I really enjoyed the crafting in this piece.. repetition really works well here. A powerful sentiment for the dwellings of the mind.
Thank you So Much UMM!!... I'm not sure I remember how to refer to you....I think you told me your name a while back (or maybe you didn't). But I can't recall!!.... Regardless, love the comment my friend......thanx again.... stay smooth!!..... Peace.......T xo ?✴❤
Very Eloquently written
GREG T!!....ALWAYS a pleasure brother.... truly!!...... stay smooth!!......PEACE n STUFF!!......T xo ?✴❤
Wow Tony!
Brilliance again!
dazzling stuff :)
Thanx So Much SALLY!!.....I appreciate your reading and taking the time to comment!!.... stay groovy girlfriend!!.... hugs n smiles......T xo ?✴❤
fantastic T it is a great read . I give it 5 paws :) rock
Thanx B!!......appreciate it man!!..... peace n stuff!!.....T xo ?
Love your imagination and style. I'm sitting back for a while and merely taking in other people's styles and inspiration.
Thanx Brother SIMON!!....I appreciate it man..... let me know if you find any 'way cool' styling or anomalies you'd care to share!!......LOTS of Love to you and yours!!.......T xo ?✴❤
This was beautiful my brother, rolled off the tonge like bitter silk, I loved it and missed your work that always had it's unique taste to it!!Â
A Black Cat came to me,
It spun
On the marble intentions,
Of its insanity.
It hisses....now.... deep inside.
A twist,
In the DNA,
Of my,
Alien,
Lineage....
That was everything man, everything, artful.
- The OnlookerÂ
Love it Tony .. you must be.. RH negativeÂ
I’m o neg and I swear to god it feels like the black cat follows me where ever I go to . Excellent write?
Woww I like to dissect such poems to appreciate its creative juices flowing. And this is a sensational remarkable poem indeed. I'm admiring how u employed quixotic and sandpaper   Tongue in this awesome piece. Kudos.
Nice to read from u again,Â
pls Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too
Purrrfect and slinky writing Tony!!! And we possess three cats and one is black.
Who is a real sly-boots and so cunning and hisses most of the time, the other two are just cool cats and friendly and approachable.Â
All characteristics that can be found in today's people.
And to think they were once worshipped as Gods and that's tragic really.
Thanks for sharing and I'm having trouble giving five stars, it's a cat-astrophe!