Poem -

Black Dog

Black Dog

The black dog stalks the night,

Preying when you least expect it.

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Eyes red as blood,

Heart as icy as the moon in the morning.

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It attacks, ripping up your wrists and thighs.

Covering them in cuts.

"Blame it on the cat,"

It whispers in it's voice.

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A voice so sly and suspicious,

Yet you choose to believe it anyway.

As it tells lies,

Telling you you're not good enough,

Not worth it,

Unwanted,

Hated.

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The black dog preys on even the strongest,

It likes a challenge.

It wants to bring you down,

Break you,

Cover you in scars.

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It survives off your sadness,

Just a little happiness will scare it away,

For a moment at least.

In that moment,

You realise how silly you were

Scared of a stupid black dog.

But then it returns,

And the cycle begins again.

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Christopher Correia

well delivered message, poet....excellent metaphor is the 'black dog' you write with purpose and thought....now you can't call yourself 'TerriblePoetSorry' it simply doesn't fit anymore, this is quite good, cheers

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TerriblePoetSorry

Thanks a lot! I call myself a "Terrible Poet" because that's what I've been called all my life. In a metaphor, I branded myself with the iron

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sparrowsong

Hello Dear Poet...

Welcome to Cosmo!

I agree with Christopher...

Whoever said those words to you..

If they were trying to encourage you that's a terrible thing to say...

If you wanted to prove them wrong you have...

:)

Consider replacingΒ terrible with something else...

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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TerriblePoetSorry

Thanks! It means a lot to me that people will stop and read my poems even if I don't think they're amazing.

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