Poem -
Bleeding Red
Sully hue in your eyes ,
Inert shades ofĀ love around.
These eyes are bleeding red ,
Filling my cartridge endlessly.
Tinted love storiesĀ evolved
A Pure heart washed away
in the tides of religion, ego and
hidden unsolved motives.
Verses born out of agony,
inevitable in this shade.
Living life in a glorious woe,
never expect a grain in love.
Fiercely advanced to
merge in the mighty ocean.
To go beyond the horizon
in my dreams,one golden day.
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Comments
Good write, thanks for sharing
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thnxxx William for your kindness...
Hi Piusha,
This is a very well recited poem by the poetess and powerful was the feeling felt from the subject of the poem, although the experience of the heart left emotions, she so, vindictively ensured, (wouldĀ not),Ā go unnoticed....Almost like reading a Ā poem by (Leola), not even a second ago, your freestyle is amazingly like hers and both,(yours and hers), are top of the line poems, told by (two), talented poetess....A wonderful style, to wonna maintain.....Ā
Cheers to you both,
Jim
Wow , dear Jim Getting a review by you itself is an honour for meĀ Jim.I'm Glad to know that you liked it.And thie was from my personal experience, so this poem is really very near to my heart.Thnxxx a million for your honest review.
Cheers
Piusha
Poetess Piusha,
My applause, My Vote, My Nomination
Willy
Thnxxx William for yourĀ kind support.