Poem -
Bleeding.....love .
cut open the web
around his beating heart
Peeled back the flesh
to watch love
In amazement
........It's
timelessness
It's.......rhythm
pounding force of life
Entrapped once
.............beneath
Layers of skin
touched......love
With my hands
.....felt it beat
trembling love
Beneath my feet
This is falling
.............Love
complete
Remove the spider
It's clinging tight
Heart lets go
....venomous bite
Bleeding.....love
Escapes the night
cut not the web
around his bleeding heart
Peel not the layers of flesh
...Watch love
In bereavement
........Die
timelessness
It's.......rhythm
pounding not of life
Removal of the spider
....the sacrifice.
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Comments
Great writing, n surprising.......darkish sadness can still produce great light, for the writing inspires others to write a new poem on fireplace blaze watching, finished soon, and starting a long oddessy poem about the honey suckle nectar of love.....may happiness make a long visit with you, N.
Thank you sweetheart, i am happy I'm just exhausted being a single mum is hard work, I'm due for a holiday before the super happy comes knocking on my door lol, love to you Dan, nardine xoxo