Blind Man
(Looking for producer..or buyer .im writer not a performer)
Remember what you had when you were all alone
An open book without a look
youΒ start at page one
And you take your pace measure every face
On the road
remember what you done when you were young and bold
looking back I can see now that ou cant be told
And you know whats right
but you had to fight
Against the Blues
Did you see the pink and purple clouds in the evening looks like going to be a large one belive it
didn't take a blind man long to see it
if it wasn't for the view
I'dΒ pack it up and leave it
Remember how you feltΒ
when you had to choose
Didn't know if your heartΒ
was shattered or bruisedΒ
And you no what's in sightΒ Β
A beautiful night
Mourning will be soon
(chorse)
Remember what you had when you were all aloneΒ
An open book without a look start at page one
And theres no words on the pageΒ
And that you had to change
No one can but you
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Beautiful. Imagination of a true poet. I think this is what I mean when speaking of vision.
Thank you ..its shortend up so it was small enough to post...
HEY ALL..WHO READS THISΒ .my phone/ compter what i use for all my online stuff just was hacked or somthing had this loud alarm going off...let me know if ne one gets any questionable messages or anything from me please
Nice write Edward.
Thanks simon im sry i dnt haveΒ voice for singing ..and its on a old crappy electric guitar no amp with 2 wrong strings on it lol
You've done an excellent job!
Thank you belive it or not iv been working on this song for bout 4 years lol
A super poem musing lyrically and playing like a lyre and poetic musical notes. Pink and purple clouds yeahh man. Kudos.
plz Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
Thanks veery muchβΊ