Poem -
Blinded by the Conflict
As raw emotions controls our mind,
Righteousness is blinded by hatred.
Peace is blind-folded through revenge,
Leading to no sight for a truce.
In order to see harmony at the end of the light,
That dark mask must come off to discover all viewpoints.
Once sight can explore all opinions,
Your brain will see perfect vision.
Forming a pact that was once brutal,
Changing into a civil agreement with many possibilities.
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Congrats MICHAEL!!......glad to see that you received a nod from admin. for this VERY insightful write......I Love the way you take the reader through the darkness and then into the light at the end.....that "dark mask" has to come off......in order to find the "perfect vision" you write of so eloquently here......ALL STARS!!......well done brother poet!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!!......T xoΒ Β ?
Thank you brother poet for your very kinds words!
your poem says nothing but the truth...Β I love it
Thank you for reading my work and for your kind words!
Wonderful write Michael
Thank you for reviewing my work and for your kind words!
Hello Michael...
Be much easier if everyone wasn't so wishy washy...
It's difficultΒ when you don't know who you can trust...
When you see people kissing other people's butts...
It's a huge turn off for me...
Violence doesn't solve anything...
Once I lose my respect I just let them go...
Great write!Β
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsongΒ
Thank you for you inspiring words!Β
you write some really in depth poems linda
Thank you so much for the Kind words!
Congrats on an awesome win Michael
Congratulations!
Congrats well done on win x
very nice congrats x
Hi Β Michael Congratulations!
Best wishes DebsΒ
I want to thank everyone for their kind words and praise on this poem. I was going through a crisis, so I didn't get to respond right away and as fast as I should have, but again, thank you so much!