The Blissful Rose Garden

It was more than one night for me
I dream off you now and I can't see
God make these feelings go away
For love unreturned burns loving hearts to darkness
And so I sit in cold remembrance
As memories of you dance my days away
A similar face staring back at me
Like a strange solitary candle burning in the womb of infinite space
This sad mirror image can't replace the twins Gemini Gemini
Your star sign haunts me and whispers union a oneness with her
Ohh God of Aquarius wash away this melancholic prayer
For I worship her no more
Help me find the door
For there must be something other that is not her
A world out there a journey perhaps
But alas still in my dreamlike napes she whispers love and draws me
More and further deeper into unreality
With me with me she speaks
And so in my romantic revery my very life passes by
I am but a spectator
A ghost in the audience waiting on the actress to return
And so I wait
And wait
I wait among the voices
I wait among the faces
Always looking for familiar traces that might lead to her
A smell a sound a familiar sight a thread of surreal static romantic energy
That might just open a pathway
Open a door to Blissful Rose Gardens
A poem
By Liam Herdman
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A brilliant and perfect composition. A greeting.
Thanks so much for the kind words
I love this...you've always been a favorite of mine Liamo :)
The pain in trying to forget or move on from something (someone/a feeling perhaps), yet knowing all too well that in reality you dont want to...and so the struggle begins
Much respect to you :)
Hi Liam Herdman,
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Glide on love.
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