" the blood rain of seasons "

In summers past, I died
a child,
and in the slow melt
of autumn's
colors, all yellow and slippery,
in a greenish morphing
I fell....
and was born again,
as winter's cold
and icy death
upon,
the liars promise
of early
springtime, where once
again,
I died......a child
and wept,
a desperate pool
of passing years,
inevitable,
discontent,
and suicides
relentlessly, pursuing
blood-rain....
Tony Taylor  (the morgue)
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Nicely done bro, :) xoxo
Hey Deano!!..... I was hoping you'd catch this..............you mentioned the dark stuff...........thanx for being cool girlfriend..........smiles.......T xx
Powerful stuff Tony!
Thanx Britany!!.........I've been Loving all your support lately.........I truly appreciate it..........I sometimes find my comments "the stuff of life!" (lol!).............thanx for being cool my friend!!,,,,,,,,,ttyl.........smiles.....T xx
Very well expressed
Thank you Ezek Lam!!.........much appreciated friend...........smiles..........TÂ xx
Oh wow Tony! This is one of my favorites from you as I do love the darker writes...this is extremely creative. I love the ending...blood rain...awesome!! :)Â
Val â„
You're kinda 'awesome" yourself sweetness!!.............love and rockets!!............TÂ xx
And in the passing seasons,
As I morphed and lived again,
Only to remember your heart,
left lying in the bloody rain,
With that I fell once more my love,
My pursuit fur us,
In vain.
xxxÂ
WOW sister girl!!.........this is like...........the coolest reply I've ever gotten..........so, that came out of the moment?.........cuz if it did!!..........we should do a co-write............love it.............and thanx for being cool!!............mucho appreciato!! (lol!).............love and rockets.......TÂ xx
We definitely should! I have never co written before, but that just popped up when I read "the blood rain of seasons" hehe glad you liked it! what was this one about?? I love the reference to the seasons and cycle of tragedy!Â
Hey Emma.........yeah that would be a blast.........this write was intended as a testament to the "Hole running through the fabric of time" kinda thing.........I sorta expounded upon the whole seasonal aspect to accent the inevitability of people repeating the mistakes of their ancestors........I write a blog on Metaphysics so I'm always looking for the new and unusual...........much like yourself and your surprising use of the English language.........ya just never know where this reality will take you.....especially.......if you remain open-minded to life's "little infinity's"..........ttyl..........smiles........TÂ xx