Poem -
" THE BLOODIED WIND "
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The bloodied wind , where lust doth lie
In every winters lullaby
Where Cain doth take his brother's breath
And lay unto his death
Where hellish winds do fly
Across the darkened horizons
A symphony of seasons
While Satan's God's do reason
Above thine own sensibilities
A springtime of Lover's weeping
And angels do end their keeping
Like a cobbler's pain, the toil of bloody precision
To torn out tongues a devil's vision
And then find,
Dripping bowels waiting there
A breezy smile, a bloody knife
A kiss of death's collision
And every winter's lullaby is born within
This terribly, blustery
And most quixotic
Bloodied wind,
And broken Lover's
Vision.....
Tony Taylor (Chicago)
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Damn Brother T I just loved this twisty turvy curvy tale told only the way you can and I must say this one stood out to me a little bit more. ENCORE!!
The sheer fact of yes, firstly being attracted to the darker stuff was simply surpassed by what I greatly perceived to believe the creation of another notch in the belt of your story telling capability. It led me from A to Z but en route down miseries mystery lane and then I eventually came out the end again.
A big fave matey!!
Sista C xo
Carey Milton dear soul!!.........it's been a while.........and there are many dark writes on my page at this point.........and I want you to know how much I appreciate your push in this direction........because when I put them out there .........I don't get the kind of feedback I expect.........thanx so much for this..........love and rockets..........T xo
Oh my bro , i love this immensely nothing like a dark cover of love, to warm ones blood
and you used the word lullaby, its awesome,
"The bloodied wind , where lust doth lie
In every winters lullaby
Where Cain doth take his brother's breath
And lay unto his death
Where hellish winds do fly
Across the darkened horizons"
really nice word play ~ :) xoxo
love ya heaps bro, nardine.
Nardine!!.....can we just go for a beer and talk about this stuff........I am MORE than thrilled that you're taking time with my stuff........I see you on FB ALOT........so overjoyed about this evening........thanx DEANO!!..........smiles.........T xo
Haha, I'm always around reading works like an invisible fairy , I'd love to comment more, sometimes I'm in a hurry and post and run, and return later, but always reading you are more than welcome, definitely one day we will have a beer~ or a whiskey and talk the ears off a donkey xoxo:)
Nardine ~ can't wait ~ but I'm terribly afraid of what will happen to the donkey (lol!).........hugs-n-kisses.........T xo
Hi Tony Taylor,
Great verse, I love it, my applause, my five stars, I love the below lines
Love & hugs
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Hey brother Maveli!!......you always amaze me at your knack for pointing out my favorite lines...........thanx for this Mr. M!!.............ttyl............T xo