Poem -
Bloody Halloween Lover's Holy Day
I followed a trail of blood
Into the basement of her lover's reaction
I found tortured souls
In a strange ferment of dissatisfaction
The festering red of a cult-like faction
Blown disproportionately outward
Into the taste for human flesh
Where love between them didn't mesh
But co-mingled
Like cannibalism and hedonism
Bubbling like liquid cocaine
Then bottled like bloody champagne
For the celebration
Of their very first date
Where they ate livers and foreskin
With semen-dipped Easter-eggs
Because for them, Halloween became
A very Holy Day
And Love's most evil way
To consummate,
Their fermenting,
Dissatisfaction...
Tony Taylor
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Tony creepy write......awesome!
Thanx DARKLY!!......I worried over posting this or not...... it's explicit.... and not really like me.......thanx so much for making me feel better about it girlfriend....... appreciate that very much.........HUGZ!!.......T xo.ย ?
Tony don't second guess yourself you are so talented! Writing is your passion! (besides Cherie~lol)
If you can look in the mirror and like the guy you see looking back that's half the battle! what I mean is: the only one you have to be accountable for is you. anyone can comment on here and a single negative word can make you or break you. You have tons of friends on Cosmo....I think it's okay to let loose once in a while.
Yay!! ~ Thanx LISA!!... what a very cool thing to say my friend...... and you're absolutely right...... I've been writing a long time in one fashion or another......I was just a little hesitant at offending, with some of those VERY graphic images, without warning the reader up front!.... but again - you're right!!....... cutting loose now and again shouldn't really matter!!!....... you're so cool for going out of your way to comment back to me......I appreciate it seriously!!...... sending you love and hugs sister girl.....thanx again for doing this........ your friend and admirer.......T xo.ย ?
wow! the imagery on this freaky number is out of this world, lovely write, dark and disturbing and ย apt for this time of month.
cheers jeffย
Thanx brother JEFF!!..... it was a tough one to post...... glad I did now....... appreciate the "way cool" support!!...... you'reย such a great addition to theย COSMO family....... hugs n high fives!!........LOVE and ROCKETS !!........T xo.ย ?
Very well written Tony. A really freaky piece for this time of the year. Well done.
Thanx so much SUSAN!!.... really appreciate the support girlfriend........ smiles.......T xo. ?
This one sreams "HALLOWEEN!!" I cringed as I was reading....spooky! and the image....freaky!
Beautifully carved...enjoyed
Lots of love...Rose
LOL!! ROSE!! ~ "Beautifully Carved!"......I LOVE IT!!...... you're so much fun!!...thanx so much for this girlfriend !!.......high fives!!........T xo.ย ?
Creepy Tony. This reminded me of all the strange occult movies from the 70's that pushed the bar on what was taboo for screen. Perfect for this spooky season hon. And that picture... damn lol ย 5 stars... Rebeccaย
Hey Thanx REBECCA!!...... did you know that the guy in that picture is ADAM LEVINE from "Maroon 5"?........glad you mentioned the pic !!......because no one really caught that....... coolness!! ~ for the 70's film referencing .....that hadn't occurred to me.......U B da bomb sweet sista girl!! (smiles)...... love this comment!!....... so happy you're here!!.......LOVE and ROCKETS !!......T xo.ย ?
Hi Tony Wow This is blood thirsty spine chilling andย
gruesome, ย Great phrasingย and imagery Shivers! :-)
A Great write asย Halloween ย nearsย
love n hugs Debs xo
Hey DEBS!!!....thanx for this......did you know that the guy in that picture is Adam Levine~ lead singer from "Maroon 5"? and judge on TV show "The VOICE".....pretty weird right!......anyway, thanx so much for the comment even though I know it WAS pretty explicit stuff.....just bein' spooky and gory!!.......ttyl girlfriend........smiles.....T xoย ย ?
My Dear Brother Poet Tony,
Wow, a very scary haunted house, inhabited by those in costumed love. ย Their outfits hide the bitter truth. ย When asked "Trick or Treat?", they demur, for their bags are already full of ill begotten delicacies. ย Shocked into the realization that without the cloak and veil, without illicit lust, that their future is void. ย So, at the stroke of midnight, as "bloody Halloween lover's" holiday ends, so do they!
Peace, Love and Rockets,
xox Larry
LOL!!... you're too cool LARRY!!......." So, as the holiday ends.... so do THEY!!" .....NEVER wouldย have come up with that (lol)........ maybe we should do a co-write!?.... could be fun!?.......thanx so much for this "Captain, my captain!"........ ttyl........ LOVE and ROCKETS !!.......T xo.ย ?
Oh my God! Crikey Tony you write as ifย
its true, tell me, this Halloween I under the bed hide you scare the delights (daylights) out ofย
Jai?. Luvโ๏ธ