Poem -
Bloody Hooks
.....dedicated to.. The fish of the sea...
The fish could escape if he was aware,
Of fast approaching death from the air!
If focused on things only in your world,
Your life then subject; to consequences unfurled!
Our battle is not against man or beast,
Powers and principalities that come to feast!
There is also great compassion from the skies!
The Spirit teaches all truth, how to be wise!
Don't be independent fish; that acts the fool!
It takes a village, please go back to school!
Yes! follow your heart, but don't be shark bait!
Angel fish say," good things come to those who wait"!
Open spiritual eyes; so you're able to flee!
Stay away from bloody hooks and powers that be!
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I have great respect for the way people respond, to the effect from your wonderful ripple in the pond!
To "The fish of the sea," thank you for your wisdom, friendship and fluid poems!...............................Jim
Hello Jim...
Great dedication...
Great adice...
Definitely don't want to be shark bait... 😳😊
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
Thank you sparrowsong! hope you are staying strong!
Hello Jim...
I'm doing good...
If I didn't know Biden I'd probably be real screwed!
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He wasn't taking me down with his ship...
Bless his heart he's trying...
I'll give him a C- for effort...
Not quite 2 months yet...
I'll wait and see if he wants an F...
He might...
You stay strong too my friend...
sparrowsong
Wow your imagination is sheer brilliance love thisun Jim thhe lad ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️💕💙💕
Thank you Greg!
do you ever sleep
Who me? No not alot!!! Lol
No Jim
Teehee ay well we writers with that vivid imagination are all tarred with the same brush 🤣💕💙💕
I only sleep every now and then because of medication and my illnesses Greg. I try to be of some help here since I'm awake a lot.
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Well I’m sorry to hear that Jim I hope it’s not too serious and that you’ll get better I’ll say a prayer for you
Much appreciated Greg!
Awww thanks so much Jim! It`s really kind of you to do something like this for me. I know I`m not the most active poet on here, but your words mean so much to me. Peace and stay awesome my friend! Hope to catch up soon ;).... perhaps a collab is in order eh? XD. Hope you are well my friend.
Thank you for your support Jill!.....................................lad
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Thank you Baker Street! every time I see your logo I want to go and listen to their classic!.............................................Jim
Jim, a superb and flowing metaphor of a poem for one and all to take stock from and hopefully reflect on.
And great kudos to you for writing, sharing and bestowing it to Fisk a.k.a Max.
Thanks Jim and I wish you well sir.
Thank you Shaun for your kind words and taking time to read !
I always think its a good idea to swim with at least one eye open .. another long overdue visit but well worth the trawl Jim .. take care good sir, go well and write on .. Neville :)