Poem -
brain killers
please give tips on how i can make it better
the buzz of a leg unoccupied
a body only yearns
and to breathe becomes to want
the single remedy for the ache
is to stop counting
but then whats it all for?
lips split like mine
& we share an inhuman experience,
our coveting
yet withholding
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Hi, welcome to cosmo, Im not sure how to reply to this poem, I can see pain and sadness but also cryptic poetry, it's difficult to see what's going on without more information, take care x
For me its about skipping meals and then like hating yourself for wanting to eat and seeing yourself in everyone whos going through that and just feeling like your trapped in your body thats not the way you want it to look. I often write quite crypticly as I like people to interperate my writing how they wish and it feels more timeless and universal. The clue to the meaning is the image I feel that like I would drink diet coke because I wanted food and drink that I enjoyed but I was caught up in my dysmorphia. The title is another clue to the meaning because not eating literally kills your brain.