Poem - 10 October 2020, 11:57 Brick Wall tara septer Build a wall round and round,Ā brick by brick,Ā piece by piece,Ā fill the cracks with concrete,Ā no more feelings, no more hurt,Ā smile at the broken world, until the pain is no more. Like 3 Pin it 0 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 379 Rating: Total votes: 2 Tags: Alone Feelings Pain Poetry Genre: Freestyle Topic: Misery Listed in: Contest Entries 4 comments
Pure405Evil10 October 2020, 12:12 THIS is the story of my life.....thank you for putting exactly how I see it in words...nice job Reply
Pratibha Savani10 October 2020, 14:59 I love the use of the wall metaphor to express feelings. Powerful little write. Px? Reply
The fish of the sea27 January 2021, 23:18 Oho a curtain! I LOVED this so simple but tells more words than what is written. Very powerful. Reply
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THIS is the story of my life.....thank you for putting exactly how I see it in words...nice job
Your welcome thank you for your feed backĀ
I love the use of the wall metaphor to express feelings. Powerful little write. Px?
Oho a curtain! I LOVED this so simple but tells more words than what is written. Very powerful.