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Broken

Broken

I can hear the sound of your heart

It hurts so much to be apart

But ill never be that person again

I will never be one of your men

I invested my life in you

I stuck to you like glue

You took advantage of me

But now I have got to flee

The feeling of being wanted will never feel the same

You thought it was all a game

Like I was your toy

But little did you know you brought me so much joy

Goodbye my friend, my lover

Now I have to rediscover

Find something to heal that void

After it’s been destroyed

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Laura Mcmillan

Nice verse, Good Rhymes, Thanks for sharing 

Goodbye my friend, my lover

Now I have to rediscover

Find something to heal that void

After it’s been destroyed

regards

williamsji

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Mark Pearson

Laura, i think we all can relate to this at  some time, beautiful,and some great lines ,well done.

Regards Mark.

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Keith Wesner

Very nice...seems to grab ahold of you

*Keith

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BLOSSOM

Broken, Laura, was a perfect title.  Such heartfelt sincere words of determination.  Sometimes you have to stand up for yourself and believe that you are better than what you are getting.  I loved the image it was perfect, and told a story in itself.  I could feel the emotion in your write, I like your style.  A vote and nomination from me Laura:)

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Stephen Weyant

another great write laura!
let me know  if you discover a cure for the void! 

awesome picture too! I have that same problem, a heart that's been torn out!

wish you well!

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Laura Wighton

Spirituality is what ive found to fill the void :)

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