Poem -
the broken can be fixed
Have patience with me
Im not all that I use to be
My mind is not clear
And worry is my fear
Step back and let me breath
But please don’t leave
I can feel space
Even when I see you face
I’ll take control
But don’t completely let go
My mind may be racing
But my heart is slowly pacing
Breath in breath out
No need to shout
Give me time
But show me things will be fine
I need my rock
To help me brake this lock
I’ll take away this curse
Before things get worse
But I need your devotion
It’s the main ingredient to my potion
Have a little faith in me
And you will see
The way I use to be
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Clo,
This is a very powerfully planted, dedicated to, (emotionally and devotion-ally)
driven poem, eluding to the characters compassion and motivation to become, the
lady who once occupied, (the now timid and unreassuring), person once known, byÂ
her and her trustworthy companion. All she asks now, is for a simple touch of
liberty, to find the will and passion, of falling in love, with love, once again....
Very passionate and pretty poem...
kind regards,
JimÂ
jimmy,
thankyou so much for your remarkable response to my poem, i couldnt have wished for a better understanding to it, your really understood the conection and that fantastic to know. thankyou so much
kind regards
clo
Hello Clo,
You are very much welcome and the poem itself spoke the words from the heart of the writer, whom wore out her silence, yet now rekindles her new found liberty, will and voice power, to once again accept that which she cant change,change that which she can and learn to be able to distinguish between the two, as she began to live her life, to it's fullest meaning..And the poem , itself spoke quite loudly to we the readers and i myself enjoyed every word of it.....Great job once again....Just as Sonia elaberated on a once earlier write, sometimes fire only will put out another fire, figuratively speaking..
Take Care,
Jim