Poem -
Broken In Time...
Bright lights dim
In dark skies
Mind, a razor blade
In the night
Angels hovering
For there's no sign
It's a crying shame
I'm broken in time
I'm broken in time
In deep waters
My reflection
Is mine
In dark woods
My affection
I find
In my sleep
Dreams
Are torn
On my knees
To claim
My wrongs
I don't feel
Anything
I even miss
The pain
While my head
Cradles
In my blistered
Hands
It's a crying shame
I'm broken in time
I'm broken in time...
Why, am I
Broken in time?
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Comments
awesome Mr Stubbs outstanding ink
Wow! Thanks very much poet friend! ?
I gave up on time, now I'm fine. Great poem Wayne.
Thanks very much Gerard! ?
Thanks Greg! ?
Sorry Nigel ??Β
Thank you Tina xΒ
Hello, Wayne,
It is my belief that feeling pain is much better than the alternative, which is feeling nothing at all.
At least if you feel pain you know you're still alive.
Nice free verse.
I enjoyed the repetitive phrase, "I'm broken in time."
Nicely done, sir.
~Dean Kuch
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Thanks very much Dean! Yeah that was my aim and understanding, again thanks, much appreciatedΒ ?Β
My pleasure.
Thanks poetryjunkie! ?Β