Poem -
Broken Soul
If I were to take a knife
to my veins tonight,
no one would know.
If I were to take a bullet
to my head tonight,
no one would notice.
If I were to die tonight
no one would realize,
because no one
pays attention
to the broken soul.
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really sad piece .worse when no-one notice's but as long as you notice yourself somethings wrong then a battle begins to fight for your freedom inside .rise and win it!! been there and realized its all down to one person to go forward ,yourself.keep on going up !! tina x
I hope this is just an artistic interpretation, if not, you are NOT Alone! God love you!
enoyed that really good and sad keep writing well done
HeyTaylor, you did a good job with this poem, beautiful, full of emotion and raw. You have a talent for sure and i would encourage you to keep writing. I found writing a great release when i was younger and going through stuff, it was a way of getting it out.
I am hoping that this is just an interpretation Taylor and not your real life, if it is real, then please talk it out, write it out and know how your value. Looking at your video you are a beautiful young girl with buckets of talent and so much to give to the world. Keep going and never give up.
We all noticed your poem :) and its great. x
Thank you everyone :) Yes it is how I feel in real life but I am getting better. I am glad though everyone enjoys this :)