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On a broken verge

On a broken verge

Breezy summer winds are now free to retire,
snow would be deserted soon to admire,
and the trees are yet to shed their attire,
birds are trapped not to chirp their satire,

summers have ended so the shining sun,
this halloween darkness will be abundant,
though it was once counted as fun,
now a pang of crisp air seems rather distant,

happiness is on a sound vacation,
fluttering butterflies are now dismissed to enchant,
and the colors must be on sedation,
or is it my flat imagination in fact ?

created in my soul , is this a havoc?
or by a maniac have I been bitten?
for relating to a possibility I reckon,
Its been long since I have written.

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Sayed Thangal

very beautiful poem, the nature is vividly described. keep on.

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Jimmy Arnold

(,Neha), as stated by Sayed,

I too, have been bitten, by the beautifully, deliverery in this poem. It really places you, ‘’there.’’ in the picture, wondering where the once deep greens, at the ‘present” prickly whites will lead you, though realizing the entrance is near, or on the awakening, but the ‘’exit,'' is that which remains to be seen. Your imagery speaks the mind and or correlation of the poem and poet, whom delivered it. Very a pretty selection, in such a pillow of snow engulfed scenery, of winter’s bitterns off ‘’past”…….Better get some gloves…nice long, cold journey of anticipation journey on this one….. Very pretty poem…(your line)..”It’s been long since I have written.”  “Welcome back”!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Jim

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Neha Jain

thanx jim..i appreciate ur veiw :)

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