Poem -
THE BUS STOP
Types various of people with colours different
To a zone, with strangers, taken away,
With passengers new, as waves to the shore
Lively again, to the bus stop, to get the bus.
Busy and short, glad mixed gloomy
Plat form, temporarily to stay destined.
A testing spot to the world next, the destination
Of immortality, truth and eternal.
The span short, vague and uncertainty
Time little to spend for others,
In between the two, birth and death
Forget to live the right, for the life here after.
Evaporated from the minds, the love
Thirst for blood, rebukes and revenges.
You remember ? , the bus fast approaching
The bus stop, to get on it, you wait.
sayed thangal
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good write sayed i enjoyed the whole indepth what lifes about tina x
Hi Tina, you got the essence of the poem, what I thought is well explained by you, thanks
sayed
Well explained dear Susan, thanks
I see the bus stop , as it is, a temperory place, as our worldly life, it is short and mortal.
When the bus, death, comes we compelled to go to another destination, that is the next world.
with regards, sayed
"With passengers new, as waves to the shore
Lively again, to the bus stop, to get the bus"
Liked these lines,Sayed.
Thanks dear Medhini, you liked two lines only?
Totally how would you interpret?
all the best, sayed
The bus stops and stops, I like this write!
Nancy
Thanks Nancy, very glad you liked it,
sayed
nice peom sayed, it has a spiritual feeling to it (life and death),as i feel most of your poems do,have to think to understand it.
much enjoyed
thanks Asma, you got a clear cut idea, just what I thought,
sayed
Thanks Chris, as you stated it is spiritual because this world is like a bus stop, not a permanent destination, we are waiting the bus, the death, to go to the world of eternity, thanks for cosmofunnel for giving a good topic to write to,
sayed
I like this poem. Sounds very spiritual like life is the bus stop. Sounds very good.
Thanks for words, as humans we still not think this life is short, engaged in violence and crimes.
sayed
i really like the wording in your poetry its different and puts images in my mind im sure that is what you are trying to achive so that's really good I hate taking the bus this is good poetry
Hi, Kenny you always like the structure and style of my poems , thanks very much you read in the way.
I like to compose in the mystic theme and indirect method, take care
sayed
great piece of work. a good way to detail life and death In words. I would of never thought a poem titled the bus stop could be about this, but I like it. great job on this.
thanks so much Amanda, your support in this field would be beneficial for me
sayed