Poem -
Caged
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In a digital age
Peering out
Through an oxidizing cage..
No self recognition
Under the heavy weather
Perspiration rusts the bars more
As I tear out another feather..Through the bars
Posts another pay cheque
Payment for poison
That helps me forget..Spreadsheets
Forecasts
Anylitical dataMusic
Writing
DrinkingMy downfall and saviour...
Loosing my last marble
In the game of KerplunkWords are analogue
Numbers are c***s
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Comments
I just loved that!! well done
Thank you Ella. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Sometimes it's good for me to vent lol.
- Syd
phenomenal write my friend
Thank you Lisa. Always a pleasure to read your comments.
- Syd
Keeping it real Syd:) Thanks for sharing. DD x
I always try to DD. Most of my writing comes from inside. Glad you enjoyed this one. Thank you.
- Syd
Enjoyed this! Identified with the feeling
John
Thank you John. I'm sad and happy at the same time with you being able to identify with the feeling.
- Syd
Wow ! You weren’t kidding , what a write .
“Music
Writing
Drinking
My downfall and saviour...“
so relatable , I felt this was taken from my head , as these are my vices , I’m trying to lose the drinking but it’s a slow gradual battle . Superb writing
Thank you so much Rob. It seems we think and vice alike 😂. I've been trying for years to conquer some of my bad habits with only limited luck.
I look forward to reading more from you - Syd
I guess it’s safe to say we are the
“ limited “ edition lol
Its always comforting to know we’re not alone and I agree there are many parallels . I think instant changes leads to relapses where gradual changes are more sustainable so we will get there , one write at a time has been my journey .