Poem -
THE CALL
Your call , I hear , I am sure
And see the way
Right and straightÂ
Still , I hesitate to enter !
So soon , a smiling face
Decent in appearanceÂ
Silly chats exchanged
To the other way , leads me on.
Ah ! glittering and illuminatingÂ
The way , all I proceed,
Feel dizzy  with over joy
With the millions , same as me !
Black clouds dim the brightÂ
A sudden halt for the merryÂ
Chaos and misfortunes  over us
Never known the way out.
No cease for the new entry
With the mind as we once
With the companion , same to guard
Not knowing how are fooled .
Oh ! to come out I striveÂ
From the drudgery I indulged in
To hear once more , the call
And to see the way - straight and right !
Sayed thangal
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Hello,
identify the caller and share your views,thanks
its a nice peace but let me see if i got it right,it seems like someone calling and then you walking to each other happily then some thing happens"Black clouds dim the bright "but im not really sure what happened in the end.but i know the poem has the drama heart racing feeling to it,i like that
Hello dear Williamsji and Asmaa,
As you stated one thing is right, the God is one caller , but  there lies one more caller ......................
thanks.
Hello,
The first caller is God , but we deviate from the caller and follow anther one ,(who is decent in appearance)
but really not so..........he is the enemy ..........
Hello,
I mean here the two calls from two sides, one is from God- it is straight and right, but the call of Devil from the other sides attracts many, and fall in to his trap , finally we understand that we are fooled for ever.
thanks so much, I like to write this type of multi interpreted poems, but most times can not, once again glad you enjoyed the poem
sayed