Yeah Tony really. You served up a fine aged steak while the rest us of are serving porridge from the likes of the orphanage of OLIVER TWIST.
Your poetry is divine
Thanx SO much GREG!!..... but...." Please Sir, I want some more!?"...... you're too cool brother!!....... smiles & high fives!!....... apologies for the late reply!!.....T xo ???✴
Tony
Have been visiting your page everyday to keep myself updated with ur new write ups
Speechless, stoked, blown away with this concept u picked up ?????
please correct me if im going off track but your intent was to reflect on how much fakeness there is all around and how a good soul is able to gage this and endeavours to segregate themselves from the poisoned negativity by leaving behind the carcass like a snake sheds its superficial skin.
For me its really important to understand the intent behind every poem i read as it really helps me grow and connect with the person whose work im reading.
Extremely well picked, well executed, well delivered.
? off !!!
WOW!! CHARU!!...what an outstanding comment!!.....I am humbled at your having spent some time on my page and come forward in earnest with pristine curiosity at my specific intent on this write!!...... your interpretation is the VERY reason I write poetry..because..... for me.......in delivering freestyle poetry the idea is to deliver the broad strokes...... thereby allowing the reader the room to color the idea in their own minds eye .......you HAVE however touched upon a part of the intent behind this write which, in its heart ~ "I thread the eye, of needless, viscera.." attempts to speak to the cancer in life itself and its ability to corrupt by eating away at the innermost workings. I am so flattered and seriously humbled at how intensely your curiosity drives you on your journey into the heart of poetry......I am proud to call you a cyber-friend!!...... Apologies for the late reply CHARU!!......feel free to PM me with anything else!!.....I think I still I owe you a reply there anyway!!...... been a little under the weather lately!!..... talk soon!!....... stay cool!!.......T xo ??✴?✴?
Hi Tony
its an honour to read your work.
Its much much deeper this concept than I thought it to be. Really speechless now.
This is poetry at its depth
Cherie mentioned you were a bit crooked healthwise. Praying for your health everyday. Not long before you guys get into the nuptial side of things.
Exciting n daunting at the sametime.
Countdown has almost begun
You're such an insightful son of a gun!!.......thanx for this my friend!!...... hugs n smiles!!....... talk to you VERY soon brother!!...... the days are ticking!!...... Peace n stuff!!.......T xo ?❤
Hey KATHLEEN!!......thanx so much for reading dear poet sister!!...... ALWAYS a pleasure to hear from you!!...... lots of love to you and yours!!.......T xo ❤?
Brother poet. Mr taylor. Wow that was a ride . felt like a read a whole. Yet oj slow motion . the facts the passion. Kinda of a native journey .Amazing write ??☺
God bless. ??????
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Excellent Tony!! I'll be reading this a few times to take it all in nice and slow! ????☮? brother ?
Thank you SIR WAYNE!!..... apologies for the late reply!.....smiles....T xo ??
Hello Tony...
Didn't you win already?
How many times can a person win?
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
Feathers
Lol!!..... Very Funny!!......thanx FEATHERS !!.....lots of love!!........ peace n stuff!!...T xo ??
Yeah Tony really. You served up a fine aged steak while the rest us of are serving porridge from the likes of the orphanage of OLIVER TWIST.
Your poetry is divine
Thanx SO much GREG!!..... but...." Please Sir, I want some more!?"...... you're too cool brother!!....... smiles & high fives!!....... apologies for the late reply!!.....T xo ???✴
Cool poetry enjoyed reading your
poem angel
Hey LINDA!!... you're such an ANGEL!!...thanx so much for this!!..... hugs n smiles!!.....T xo ??
Tony
Have been visiting your page everyday to keep myself updated with ur new write ups
Speechless, stoked, blown away with this concept u picked up ?????
please correct me if im going off track but your intent was to reflect on how much fakeness there is all around and how a good soul is able to gage this and endeavours to segregate themselves from the poisoned negativity by leaving behind the carcass like a snake sheds its superficial skin.
For me its really important to understand the intent behind every poem i read as it really helps me grow and connect with the person whose work im reading.
Extremely well picked, well executed, well delivered.
? off !!!
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WOW!! CHARU!!...what an outstanding comment!!.....I am humbled at your having spent some time on my page and come forward in earnest with pristine curiosity at my specific intent on this write!!...... your interpretation is the VERY reason I write poetry..because..... for me.......in delivering freestyle poetry the idea is to deliver the broad strokes...... thereby allowing the reader the room to color the idea in their own minds eye .......you HAVE however touched upon a part of the intent behind this write which, in its heart ~ "I thread the eye, of needless, viscera.." attempts to speak to the cancer in life itself and its ability to corrupt by eating away at the innermost workings. I am so flattered and seriously humbled at how intensely your curiosity drives you on your journey into the heart of poetry......I am proud to call you a cyber-friend!!...... Apologies for the late reply CHARU!!......feel free to PM me with anything else!!.....I think I still I owe you a reply there anyway!!...... been a little under the weather lately!!..... talk soon!!....... stay cool!!.......T xo ??✴?✴?
Hi Tony
its an honour to read your work.
Its much much deeper this concept than I thought it to be. Really speechless now.
This is poetry at its depth
Cherie mentioned you were a bit crooked healthwise. Praying for your health everyday. Not long before you guys get into the nuptial side of things.
Exciting n daunting at the sametime.
Countdown has almost begun
will b in tch via messaging tool xx
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My Dear Tony,
I recoil as I read the words of the Serpent
I pass on "The Apple", but do ingest his intent
Love,
Larry xxx
You're such an insightful son of a gun!!.......thanx for this my friend!!...... hugs n smiles!!....... talk to you VERY soon brother!!...... the days are ticking!!...... Peace n stuff!!.......T xo ?❤
Fabulous Tony
Thank you for job well done
❤️Kathleen
Hey KATHLEEN!!......thanx so much for reading dear poet sister!!...... ALWAYS a pleasure to hear from you!!...... lots of love to you and yours!!.......T xo ❤?
Hi Tony
just caught up a bit and read cancerous, greggs right a fine steak sir, I dunno how you do it bit keep doing it I'm in awe
Brother poet. Mr taylor. Wow that was a ride . felt like a read a whole. Yet oj slow motion . the facts the passion. Kinda of a native journey .Amazing write ??☺
God bless. ??????
? ?POETRY?DELIVERY
wonderful ink Tony, I wish I could more comments on my work, like you and Cherie. Your work is quite outstanding.